Have you ever felt like a piece of Gum......
which is on somebody's hands,
unaware till that person chew you up
sucking in all you have?
dissolving all your flavor in the saliva
& disfiguring your shape..
While tearing you apart....
That person being immersed in joy
by the flavor...exhumed by you?
So… once all the flavor has gone,
And once your very existence become obsolete,
Have you been thrown down the gutter?
With nothing with you,
Exhausted, wasted, depressed
& enraged with yourself,
Since you don’t have a heart to hurt…
The person who hurt you?
And did you lay….on that cold gutter
Like a piece of gum…
Wasted & Stripped off of your best,
Far too deep from what you were..
Lonesome in thought,
Like I did
3 comments:
this has potential! you should work on it some more, try polishing it up a bit. it could be great. I like the ending, it feels very heartfelt.
I am looking forward to the revised version!
Thanks........ Will look forward in revising it =)
Hey man its a kool poem. Did you write that poem while eating some gum ? i guess you did man hehe Cheers !!!
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